Saturday, August 15, 2015

Common Ap essay Option #1




Common App essay  Option #1

  This week , we will discuss the various common app essay options

 The first and most popular option is:
1. Some students have a background, identity, interest, or talent that is so meaningful they believe their application would be incomplete without it. If this sounds like you, then please share your story.
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 The advantage  of this prompt is its open ended nature.  Please note that your story need not be  about your personal life.   This is a great way to reveal something about your academic   interests and  aspirations.   If you are interested  in an esoteric or interdisciplinary  subject  like  Artificial intelligence models  of neural structures, this is  your chance to  talk about it.
Keep in mind that the essay is about your fundamental identity and your intellectual mindset.  Show how wevents in your life have  have shaped your interests.

 Cliches to avoid: 
 Far too many Asian students  talk about  how their parents and  grandparents lived simply and made sacrifices to educate  the next generation.  This is a swell worn cliche one should avoid, focus on yourself  and not your family.
Another cliche  is overcoming difficulties, unless these have shaped your intellectual  interests in some way, avoid this. The essay should  relate to academics  directly  For example,   one student wrote about having a learning disability which   made reading a challenge. However he was very skilled in working with his hands which is why he aspired to study engineering.


 One way to  keep your essay interesting is to  allow  for a focus and discussion of abstract ideas such as   how you   learn best   when ir involves real world work rather than  mer classroom activities.



 I will be discussing  the other essay prompts during the coming week.









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